Spread 'em wide, spread 'em fast
Fuck me hard, forget the past
Lets see how long I can last
When you fuck me hard, and fuck me fast
And so we decay
The walls fall away
I haven't a thing left to say
So inside I know I died today
Take me now and make me feel
Something I don't know is real
With the thighs as cold as winter steel
I sign my soul in this devil deal
And so we decay
The walls fall away
I haven't a thing left to say
So inside I know I died today
In my heart there's holes
Where the her.mites ate me
In my head there's holes
When the bullets left me breathless
And so we decay
As the warmth fades away
The bugs wont even stay
Because the Angel died today















Comments
While it's a little bit repetitive at times, I particularly like the "bullets leave me breathless" bit.
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"Nowadays a broken heart will run to many editions." -Lord Henry Wotton
With the "Bullets leave me breathless" part, what it was.. was this thing that happens, where.. sometimes.. when I'm "working my mojo" so to speak, I'll give birth to these really fantastic ideas or lines that just stand out from the rest. Now, all my lines are like children, and I couldn't pick a favorite kid. But fortunately, they're not EXACTLY like children, so I can have a favorite, and that's one of them. There was definitely a twinkle in my eye when I penned that one down.
Oooo, I'm gettin' goosebumps just talkin' about it.
Let's have a round of applause, shall we?
There were a few little missing apostrophes, but the poem as a whole was so excellent that that didn't stop me from favourite-ing it. Knew I was watching for a reason.
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"I never tilt against Beauty."
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Simply the best.
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i really wish i had things to write about, but, that's the life of a designer
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It's kind of neat how those particular lines stand out - even though they are totally in context.
I don't know, though; some people pick favourites out of their kids, too.
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"Nowadays a broken heart will run to many editions." -Lord Henry Wotton
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Feed me please.
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