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Soul v. 3.0 by ~SethCynical:iconSethCynical:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Transgressive > Song


I'm a cynic traped in the body of a hedonist
another prohet of a million broken dreams
I'm imperfect trapped inside the head of a perfectionist
maybe it's time to lay me down to sleep


Execute program
82-13
self destruct sequence
counting down
5 4 3 2 1
operation complete


I'm a sadist trapped in the hands of a pacifist
how could I ever live like this
I'm a killer stuck with the heart of a savior
take heed, take blood, and hold up a fist


Execute program
82-13
self destruct sequence
counting down
5 4 3 2 1
operation complete


Sterile
and
In Denial
and
Fed a Pile
you.

I'll do what it takes
to wipe from the face
the last little truth you have.
me.

How should I do it?
Rope? Knife? Gun?
oh dear, oh my
this is gonna be fun

How should I do it?
Rope? Knife? Gun?
oh dear, oh my
this is lots of fun

Execute program
82-13
self destruct sequence
counting down
5 4 3 2 1
operation complete
©2006-2009 ~SethCynical
:iconsethcynical:

Author's Comments

This is an interesting one. I originally wrote it as a non-Acid perspective peice, and CERTAINLY a non-Seth perspective peice, but in retrospect, it does fit with Acid. For now, though, I'm keeping it in it's original context, an original style of suicide note. Not all of the views expressed are mine, but some are.

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Mood: Wow! `neo-the-foxycoon Sep 22, 2006, 8:18:03 PM
shocking

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FOOXXYYYYCOOOONNNN!!!!!
:iconpurplefraggle:
~purplefraggle Mar 6, 2007, 9:20:46 AM
I love it.. another fav O.o

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Give Me One More Medicated Peaceful Moment...
:iconexternal-failure:
~eXternal-Failure Apr 11, 2007, 5:15:27 PM
oi..awsomely written..good job..u are so good at writing....instant fav

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She is everything to me
The unrequited dream
A song that no one sings
The unattainable, Shes a myth that I have to believe in
All I need to make it real is one more reason
I don't know what to do,I dont know what to do when she makes me sad-Slipknot-
:iconsethcynical:
~SethCynical Apr 12, 2007, 6:07:36 PM
heh, Why thank you, that's quite flattering.
:iconexternal-failure:
~eXternal-Failure Apr 12, 2007, 6:15:22 PM
ur welcome/.///^^

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She is everything to me
The unrequited dream
A song that no one sings
The unattainable, Shes a myth that I have to believe in
All I need to make it real is one more reason
I don't know what to do,I dont know what to do when she makes me sad-Slipknot-
:iconcruthaitheach:
~Cruthaitheach Sep 15, 2007, 4:03:43 PM
I love the first and third stanza, they sounded awesome when I read them. As a whole it's pretty good too, but the first and third are my favourite. =)

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LoveLaughLive
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~SethCynical Sep 17, 2007, 12:54:16 PM
yeah, the whole first verse is the song for me. I think I settled when it comes to the rest of the song, which isn't great.. But that's that.. maybe I'll work it out more at a later time. Thanks for the fav's, much appreciated!
:iconcruthaitheach:
~Cruthaitheach Sep 17, 2007, 1:02:49 PM
You're very welcome.

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LoveLaughLive
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